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This reminds me of O. Butler’s dystopia writing with some comic flair… made me think of Watchmen the comic by A. Moore … I can see a graphic novel of this lol … I can also hear Lupe totally making a concept album/ep off this joint lol

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NJ Fiction's avatar

I chuckled so much! Give us more

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Ashe's avatar

I ki ki ki’d until it dawned on me that some of this is already happening, or has the potential to happen. Then I grabbed an alcoholic beverage, amd ki ki ki’d some more cuz what else can you do? Anyhoo i literally just watched a documentary last week about men in India that are getting their legs broken and reset to be taller, it takes a couple years if it works. I enjoyed that doc and this story 🙂

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mark's avatar

Come on, bring it! Great beginning, I'm in. Don't have the ducats to subscribe, but I'll buy you a coffee. Was it Hunter S. Thompson who said something like, "When the going gets rough, the weird turn pro..."? Anyway...Carry on!😎🙌🏽

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ARC's avatar

Funny

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L.L. Ford's avatar

Oh that was fun in the weirdest way. I am here for it!

It feels like almost cyberpunk but inspired by American absurdity, but the problem with American absurdity is its never quite as far away as I'd like!

But seriously, loving the voice you're bringing to your fiction!

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