I really appreciate that, I was trying to tap into a different voice. My favorite short story writer on here @NJ has a way of (To me at least) writing words that feel like a higher power is narrating them to you. I was trying to do that with this story, plus I just miss Brooklyn.
Thank you for taking the time out of your day to read it, I have been thinking about love a lot lately, so this is what manifested. Also, by "Slugfest" I mean an intense battle between two equally powerful forces.
Yaay, I'm glad you're excited about the playlist. I can't disconnect my love of writing with my love for music, so I try to add a little soundtrack for everything I write.
This line 😮💨
“For one night, he can play with the darkness, cosplay emotions, and connect, all while chasing his and her orgasm.”
You were in your bag bro 👏🏽
I really appreciate that, I was trying to tap into a different voice. My favorite short story writer on here @NJ has a way of (To me at least) writing words that feel like a higher power is narrating them to you. I was trying to do that with this story, plus I just miss Brooklyn.
You definitely tapped into the sensual energy NJ comes with.
Someday I’ll try my hand at the slightly erotic. I think it’ll be a fun creative experiment.
Exquisite storytelling. I just wish real life was like that. ❤️
PS: what the hell is a slugfest? 🐌
Thank you for taking the time out of your day to read it, I have been thinking about love a lot lately, so this is what manifested. Also, by "Slugfest" I mean an intense battle between two equally powerful forces.
Loved this! Totally felt transported to the basement party in E Flatbush and loved the idea of a fuckboy evolving!
Yooo, thank you so much for this!
This was 🔥 10/10
This was 🔥 10/10
Thanks fam, I started the draft of this three weeks ago at a locked in writing session
This story pulled me in
wow…this took my breath away
Thank you!
I love it when music accompanies a story, and to have an entire mix, how great is that!
Yaay, I'm glad you're excited about the playlist. I can't disconnect my love of writing with my love for music, so I try to add a little soundtrack for everything I write.
It really amplified the story and the tension, especially playing the first track while reading the description of her dancing, it was so good!
This is my first time reading this post since I published it, and yeah. I was in my bag!